All Comments on 'Best of Both Worlds Ch. 08'

I have just re-read this story from the begining and although I don't really understand why Sarah cheated in the first place(But then does anyone know why someone cheats truthfully?) I do like the story and the emotions that you are putting in to it do seem real. So far most of the comments on your other chapters have been good apart from the comments from the hang her high camp. I do not agree with cheating or any extramarital sex at least stories like yours shows the consequences of have that type of sex. All I can say is if you want to let Sarah and bill get back together me being an old romantic I say let them do it, even if most people won't.

A slut's regret? Hard to feel any measure of sorrow for this ex-wife. She got off pretty easy.

Having read all chapters even the most recent submission as of 01/09/08, it is apparent that the story will continue. I do look forward to it as all past chapters have been most enjoyable and do reflect on the consequences of infidelity and more importantly the maintenance of a healthy relationship of offspring in the process. I though note that the most recent submission was made almost 1 year since the previous one. I do hope you find the time to continue this story to its conclusion in a timely manner and look forward to reading it once it is posted. Good Luck and may you have the time and inspiration to continue this excellent gift with others.

I too went back and re read the entire story and enjoyed

it as much the second time. Please don't make us wait

another year.

are your writing such a story. of course well written even if chapter 1 seems missing. there is more pain then any kind of erotic and nothing is understandable in the main persons reaction.

CHooo Chooo... wooo whoo...!!! Now arriving on track 9 the Forced Reconciliation express train... making stops at wimpville loserland Nofuckingclueton and Mt wasteoftime.

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This chapter is noting but a BIG step to get the husband to take her back. Its awful crap; we still dont know WHY she cheated with Jacques. SHE doesnt know!!!. Her confession/ explnation is mindless drivel... it tells us nothing.

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zip. da nada. squat. bupkis.

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What it does do is remind us how evil and seriously flawed this cunt whore wife is. That even when caught she went to Jacques for More fucking. NOTHING she says and explains or Realizes can say more about her than THOSE actions.

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even the counselling is pointless... she still doesnt know why.

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yet we all know this author is going to force them back together even though the husband or the wife will have no idea WHY she cheated. Which means she will place herself back into the those situations where once more it will happen.

I laughed hard Harry! Your extended train image including all of the 'stations' just made me heave in laughter; Wow! <P> Now everyone could be happy:some with the story and some with the comments.

but that she shows remorse is one thing ...i hope he got ass from the other woamn she cauht him with i think he did ...but as for showing lingerie to others before him well she could pay him back by leting him fuck her in new lingerie her new hubby hasnt seen ...the better if its jacques ...as for her ass she should give it to him every time she sees him ...just let him fuck her ass n nothing else unless she sucks his cock after ...maybe she should really find a woman that will give her ass virginity to bill her ex hubby ...just tell her hubby now that she owes her ex this special thing ...yes im a male who agrees if a woman cheats ...yes you can still fuck her but only after the divorce ...and she is never wife material again ... i guess to me a wife like that is not worth anything but what she will give you be it another womans pussy or ass ...or her giving her ass up ...to me her ass or a blow job after i fucked her ass would be the only way id ever take her again ..just to keep reminding her of her betrayal to me ...i think a woman should agree to that if she really shows remorse as this wife does ...that way she could remember every time i fucked her what she did to screw up her life ...as for the daughter shed have to know that the only way her mother and i met was for meto fuck her in someone elses lingerie and up her ass ...more of how she now wishes she was strong enough t ocommit suicide because she now knows how bad she fucked up ..mauybe suicide would be better for all concerned ...her lover wont have to know that now hes the cuchkhold

her daughter who will finally be able to get over the fact her mother was a slut who broke up her family ...and her hubby so now he can finally find a wife who will withhold nothing ...not her ass or a shaved pussy if he so desires ...yes in this case i think her suicide would be the correct thing to do...

Perhaps they will reconcile, perhaps not. Life is never easy and there are no hard and fast rules. She was wrong. She cheated and didn't find out until too late what it would cost. The writing is excellant and the characters are real. All in all, a very good story. Keep up the good work.

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and read over the previous chapters ...some further comments ..she fucked up royally ...i think its obvious she knows she fucked up ...but i cant see him ever married to her again ...i think maybe what needs to happen is they start having sex again...i think maybe for the first little while that all he does is fuck her ass so she knows what he miissed ..maybe yes she can suck his cock after ....i think they maybe could later live together but i think she also owes finding him another woman for him to ass fuck so she knows he has with someone else ..to let him get even for her giving something to another man that she wouldnt give him ...i also think she should have her pussy hair permanently removed and a tattoo put above her pussy stating that she is her ex hubbys slut n no one elses ...i further think she should hunt up jacques and see him ass fucked so he knows what its like ...and show pictures to her ex and tell him this is my revenge on a predator ....but no he dont ever need remarry her id say they could sleep together maybe even live together but this way he could still fuck other ladies if he wanted ...after all she did drive him away and if shes right and she now knows what she drove away ...i think she needs reminding how it hurts to see the one you love fuck others ...every now and then ...andthen remember that it is because of her that this had to happen ...one day they will both be old and maybe neither will be able to fuck each other never mind others ...then she can be happy that she may truly have him t oherself again ...id say even ge tburied together just buy 3 plots and leave the space between and make sure t ouse different names ...im sure he made her revert back t oher maiden name right ...t ome living together like that should be good enough for her she has to stay faithful from now on and he gets t ofuck around as payment for her fucking around and making her mistake ....please end it at least so we can see your solution ...i still think mines the way t ogo though ...dont let them remarry please

I can see him letting her back into his life as the mother of his child, nothing more. She doesn't know why she did it? Well, that just means she'll do it again if conditions are right. Nothing more than a peaceful relationship should exist between them, no trust and no romance. Harry does have the basic idea correct.

I love to read series, but I hate to read serials. I want to know that the story is finished before I start. In this case, each of the last three chapters could have been the end of the story. Life does go on and unlike stories doesn't get wrapped up in a nice neat bow.

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One of the things I don't like about series is that they cover the same ground over and over for readers who didn't read the first parts. I don't like it but I can live with it. This isn't a series but the same story, you shouldn't keep going back over the same material.

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Now that that is out of the way, let me tell you how much I enjoy your writing. I frequently wish I hadn't been hooked on "Loving wives" by my friend, but I am, and you are one of the best. The emotions and actions are real and not stylized. That's why I read, to see into the deepest part of humanity, and you do it so well.

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I can feel her true remorse, and how much worse it is to know that she can't do anything to fix it. That's not the way Americans normally look at problems. We're natural fixers, but when the problem is relationships, no one person can fix a broken one.

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Joe and I talked about this for hours as he wrote his stories. The pure helplessness of a spouse who has screwed up, knows it and is prepared to do anything to fix it but isn't allowed. That's not a slam at the husband, how can he trust someone who has done what this wife did? Why should he? As readers we know there's real remorse and change in the cheater, but how can the husband?

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I just hope that I don't have to wait for another year to see the next chapter.

I kind of wish that you would get to the end and then write

other stories. Your story is interesting. In fact, Bill, is to me a fairly heroic figure. I really do not think that I could measure up to the emotional control he has shown. Of course, there are those who would call him a wimp because he did not hurt people the way they felt he should but basically I do not see any advantage in hurting Jennifer, and any injury to his wife would end up effecting Jennifer.

good writing. Unlike some comments, I think there's no real need for another chapter. Will they be together again ? Who cares in the end. The pain of the betrayal is obvious and on both sides. She is ready to move on after finding some closure in her mind. He has already moved on, if not to full satisfaction, he focused on his daughter and picked some sex in between. Leave it there. Keep up the good work though. Reading the stories again is always a pleasure. G.Belgium

Actually Harry's analysis is better than this chapter. This slut is only experiencing a fraction of the pain she inflicted on her former husband. In reality, the daughter would be better off with the father than this cheating whore. She will cheat again - it is in her genes. The whole story by this author however is a good story overall and sure beats the fucked up stories that bonnietaylor & idiot sidekicks are pushing out there.

Amy Peters ... yes Amy because only a wimp, spineless writer would "dream up" such BS about "ANY" male feeling badly for this SLUT! While well written, the story's premise that the husband would even listen to her "excuses" after she cheated on him for months destroys the story completely! Go interview 100 men and see if you find one who remotely resembles the husband in this story ... they don't exist. Why? because real men have something you don't have ... a backbone!

ie their for there..extra words in a sentence...etc. do you use a voice writer to print these stories and a spell checker? the words are not misspelled such as

waste for waist..past instead of passed..etc

The Big Wimpout.

Would someone explain to me why the writers in this category (LW ) seem so "damned" willing to have the cuckold husband forgive the adulterous wife after she has carried on "long term" affair ... an affair that clearly broke her marriage vows, betrayed her husband's love for them & destroyed her husband's trust in her. I'm not talking about a "single slip" or an impaired ( drugs, alcohol ) female who was taken advantage of ... or even blackmailed ... I'm talking about a "willful" intent to go out and fuck a man ( not her husband ) multiple times without any regard for her marriage or her spouse. Then the writers attempt to excuse the whore wife by blaming the the on-going, multiple cheating on a "fugue moment, short term insanity, PMS or because the dog ate her home work which is so much bullshit!! I just don't get it and probably never will !!!! What I do get is that "this writer" ( like so many others ) will most likely have Bill take Jennifer back because she has "suffered" enough. Hopefully "andrewpeters" you will take the road less traveled by giving the cheating slut what she deserves but if your track record is anything like the others I feel a CUCKHOLD moment coming on!

I rated this chapter 5*****.

after the spiel on the 4 Ws. will he reconsider. TK U MLJ LV NV

I completely agree with most of the commenters, I sense a forced reconciliation in the next chapter. I'm not a hopeless romantic ( maybe a little) with that being said, I think most of the reconciliation posse are just hopeless romantics who'd take this whore back regardless of her actions. It's a beautiful thing to be in love, but --what happens when that one person you love & cherish totally destroy & shit on that love? Should you just bite the bullet & reconcile because of the "good years" you've shared? What happens when the betrayer pushed that "love" aside just so they can have a little "excitement" ? It wouuld be a horrible mistake taking the French slut back, she can't even explain why she did it, that tells me she'll do it again, why would anyone want to be with a person such as this tramp wife? She pushed her love as well as her husbands & daughters love to the side so she can fuck Jacque, she refused dates with her husband, she purchased new sexy underwear for her lover, she did things with her lover that she never even considered doing for her own husband who she professed to have loved with all her heart. She's been having a year long affair, which means she's been lying & deceiveing her true "love" to add to her complete lack of love & respect she invites her lover into their home & into her marital bed, where they raised their daughter, where it held so many wonderful & "loving" memories. Give me a break! If this is what's called "LOVE" than my husband & I been doing it wrong. Why is it that all the romantics want reconciliation regardless of the extint of the betrayal? She even got angry at her husband for not understanding that it was just sex & it didn't reflect upon their relationship; she's either very stupid or Jacques cock caused her some brain damage because she even admitted if the shoes was on the other foot she would've castrated him not to mention keep his daughter away, & this is the woman the romantic crowd wants the poor idiotic husband to take back? Why did it anger her to see him with other women yet she ran straight to Jacque a week/month after the disaster occurred in her bedroom, to show how even more dangerously stupid this cock slut is she actually thought she was the one & only Jacque was fucking & that he had feelings for her... She thinks her stretched out pussy is gold plated . This is when she realized how badly she fucked up, even as she was apologizing when caught I felt she wasn't sorry at all, she was sorry that she was caught but not sorry she fuck'd around on a man who supposedly loved her, took care of her, always there for her, made love to her, provided for her, yet this wasn't enough she willingly jeopardize her marriage every Thursday at noon for a year. The absolute ridiculous thing about it is she doesn't know why. Her little speech hadn't change my opinion of her at all. The husband needs to stop dwelling & move on; he's never going to able to move on if he can't let her go. . I would hate for them to reconcile, I know their daughter want them back together again, she'll get over it , kids survive divorces all the time, he shouldn't reconcile with the cum slut just for his daughter although I understand him wanting his family back again, but he has to realize he wasn't the one who broke up the family. The daughter will understand as she gets older why her parents are divorced, kids want their parents to stay together ... That's a given... But they're young, they don't understand all that goes on resulting in divorce. She'll get over it. My parents divorced when I was 5, I never considered myself being brought up in a broken home, my daddy was always there as well as my mommy. I just felt loved by both. I'm married & happy. I've never cheated on my husband. I wouldn't jeopardize my marriage for anything. This wife willingly threw her family away for nothing. She doesn't even know why... That's sad.

reminds me of the road runner cartoons. You can either run into the wall or get run over by the train. Either way there is a collision. Train wreck alert.

thanks for the offering.

Sarah has continuously proclaimed to Bill that she never stopped loving him all through her love affair - I call bullshit on this. Sarah only thought about her lover for a year and still went back to him after Bill caught her. Sarah was so consumed with her lover that sex at home with Bill took a very back seat most nights. Sure she on occasion at the beginning of her affair showed interest in sex at home but, after long afternoons with her lover she would come home with that after sex glow and tell Bill that she was too tired that night many times over. She was so indulged in her love affair that she brought her lover home to ass fuck her in her husbands bed. So no, there was no continuing LOVE with Bill going on and it would have diminished further if she hadn't been caught and then found out that she was only one "time slot" in her lovers life. No I can't accept that Bill is mainly focused on scene in his bedroom with Sarah and her lover (as bad as that was) but the total year of abandonment that his wife did to their marriage. There should be no reconciliation in this marriage and Sarah can't be trusted in the future when she starts feeling old and not sexy anymore - she is just too selfish to be a wife.

No RAAC please! She does not deserve it.

Die slowly you CUCKYBOY cheating WHORE wife Apologist ASSHOLE!

Reads like the voice of experience. Very realistic

Im all for a person redeeming themself but please do not end this with them reconciling. Give the man some self respect and let him move on and find happiness with another woman. Yes she is sorry she cheated on him but what she did and for how long with no regard to her family is not something you can come back from. Let them move on.

Anybody but this piece of garbage. She just keeps repackaging her BS hoping something works, so she can selfishly get her happy life back and suffer no consequences. Most literotica writers dig a hole too deep for the cheating wife, then turn the husband into the second coming of christ to justify the raac. Going to guess that this is where we are headed.

Honestly what she did went too far, no sympathy for the slut. I was hoping the husband had told her to get f*cked and eat shit instead. I couldn't even finish this chapter.

That WAS NOT the silly moron the author wrote a couple years ago in the first few chapters. That’s that trap an author can step in when he or she writes in first person, as this one did repeatedly for this wife. THAT person is not THIS person.

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what a load of cods wallop

She sounds like she is on a loop, same old shit, different conversation. Sounds to me like her councilor is stealing her money in these sessions.

This was painful to read. First, these long-winded, circular, over-explaining speeches are NOT readable. Go read 'Stalin's Collected Speeches to the Party Congresses of the Soviet Union' and your eyes will glaze over the same way. Then, this pathetic writer TELLS us mostly what Bill says rather than shows us Bill responding. This part should've been about 300-words, max, long and appended to the last turd in this suite.