All Comments on 'Better off Dead'

The last two pages gave her closure with her family and husband. It freed her and got her situation into perspective, so she could move forward. It was a bit hurried at the end but so what. A great story, usual with this writer. Five stars.

A SS06 story where the woman wins! *****

...what some seem to think was a rushed ending. It worked for me. Have you changed your opinion about women?

Top hat to you; I gave a high five.

I WISH THE AUTHOR WAS STILL ACTIVE! MAYBE AS SOMEONE ELSE, BUT WHY? THANX STANGSTAR06

I believe he is on the other site - SOL

Watch them damn Canadians

Another good story and a little humor

I enjoyed this one more than the rest of the stories by .SS06 .mostly because none of it was done for thrills or malice.

completely unrealistic...enormously entertaining and, at points, hilarious. 5

This story brought so many things to light, that I couldn't believe it. There are lives like this, I guarantee it. Nice story, Thanks...

As Bubba used to tell me "as happy as a clam in warm water."

"Then there was the time she invented the air blow job. She held her mouth open so big that she didn't even touch my dick. She just moved her head back and forth while huffing over it." I never had one of those, must be I was never quite the asshole as Zeb, er, Zeke was.

"When my check came and she wanted a shirt or some panties or some other outrageous demand, she'd have sex with me." There's a cure for that, don't let her wear any. It's also great to work with a lady that you dressed that morning knowing she's commando.

"That God awful sound like Satan's claws scratching on the gates of hell." Don't know where you picked this line up, but damn... Lucifer is going to be back for another season.

"Just as I crossed the threshold White hot pain lanced through my body. It was so intense that I actually wet myself." This reminds me of two things: being a kid and trying to figure out why a 5 horse Johnson outboard won't start. Do Not, repeat, Do Not hold the end of the spark plug wire with your left hand and pull the recoil cord with your right to check the magneto! The second is if you are testing an invisible dog fence, again Do Not have your fingers across the prongs of the collar when you cross that magic line!

"Shit, Tammy was a natural born actress. She had to be the Lizabeth Taylor...make that Lizabeth Trailer of the family." Liz was beautiful but she was also a tad dumpy on the bottom end. LMFAO

I was going to suggest another song title for you to write a story about, but wait, you already did here - Toby Keith's "Trailerhood".

"I even had a car. I had a brand new Cadillac XLR hardtop convertible." WTF, over? A piece of shit Caddy? The original Bullitt was in Detroit a few months ago for sale.

"He just nodded his head. We got into his car, a twenty five year old Buick that was held together with duct tape and spit." Had a '64 Buick, ever have to replace a heater core in January, outside in the driveway in Michigan with the wind blowing up your ass coming off the frozen lake?

"I'm the Canadian, "A," said Adam." Stang ought to know a few Canuks, their right across the river.

Yes he's posting on SOL now which is where I'll be when I'm caught up here. Nothing, wrong. with, you, commas, either. Signed: BTW

bartender, I'll have another one, just like this one.

And with tongue in cheek, I must point out that its "eh" not "A". More evidence would be the back bacon sandwichs and the plaid jackets.

Fuck you man. Why degrade and stereotype poor people AND write a shitty ending?

Fucks sake.

- This was going to be the review until I finished reading. Thanks mate. Great story.

Please write more chapters with Tori getting married and having more children... with the love of her life!

A poor story about trailer trash. You try to make them so poor and so heroic as crimes are committed.

Just my opinion on a shitty story

Scores 1/5 for being too turgid.

Great story. Loved every page.

This was pure joy from start to finish. Thank you for it.

When it was said that Adam killed himself, I almost gave up on the story. Glad I read til the end.

One of his best

Great story! ...had me worried about the possible sad ending. Good on you.

Thoroughly enjoyed this read. Then again I feel the same for almost all of your stories. Thanks for your writing

TRAILER PARK TRASH BELONG IN THE TRAILER PARK

A romance about a bunch of losers, surrounded by losers.

A fine tale of scrofulous scumbags. Almost my distant cousins

4. Sweet tale but with a pretty effed up way of getting there. Glad it had a happy ending, atleast for Victoria and Adam.

Great read, so funny!

The story was fine until the ending. The lack of any emotions from Victoria when she learned that Adam had "died" kind of soured it for me. She should have been in tears if she loved him so damn much. Way too sterile of an ending.

Not a likable character in the bunch.

would have been 5 stars but you made tela settle for damon instead of a human guy .

Geeze i read some of these comments n winder why some of these people come here. If u all think u r so much better get to it. Ill read urs next see how ur doin easy to judge from the other side of the pen. My opinion which is like aholes here we all have em. I enjoyed it thanks for ur hard kno it was appreciated.

Amazing variation of beauty and the beast.

Happy endings for everyone in the big house.

Sorry the whole thing was just stupid

Do not a lot of these "readers" realize it's fiction. The author can and does write stories. That's all they are. Stories at the end of the day. If these "anonymous" criticscannot understand this fact, then maybe they themselves are just ficticious people Now, having had my little "peeve" this story is worthy of 5 stars, and before "anonymous" complains, this is my opinion

Not so good.

Victoria seemed to have a yoyo like IQ, most times STUPID, occasionally capable of improvement, her going back to see her family was MONUMENTALY IDIOT and her not getting out of there (the trailer park) showed a truly astonishing amount of obtuseness.

Newford9b pretty much summed it up.. Da Dang think is just a Story.. freeeeee story at dat . U know likey, write ur own dang story. Weez cod use knew phony balonia lovey doviee storieees with just a touch of an 👁️fer an. 👁️., 👍👍😜😁y'all keep um coming ss6... yeA win some and u don't..,. Later..

Yes, we KNOW that this is just a story, but it's an extremely STUPID one. Especially the part from where Victoria leaves Adam to go back to her family through to the epilogue. 3* and that's mostly for the beginning of the story.

I was rooting for Adam all along. Victoria got smarter so I can forgive the dumb shot she did. The fact that she didn’t immediately latch onto Adam speaks to her knowing what’s important to her. Can’t fault her for that.

This is a twisted, beautiful story.

I really enjoyed it.

One small legal point, the police can charge a person with a crime without having someone complain about it to them.

5 Stars on this story . Keep up the good work

Interesting she's still not without guilt she still cheated instead of divorce she chose to fuck another man for 2 years with that being said she deserves to die just like her lover Adam her now ex husband and sister is no better for they was fucking before she was even kidnapped so with that being said they also deserve to die there really wasn't a likeable character between the 4 main characters the lady at the office maybe tela or Damon could have been but they were just side characters not main characters again the 4 main characters were just cheaters who has no damn morals and they all deserve to die

@rblotch66 yes you still can fault her she still cheated pure and simple just like Adam still fucked a married woman just like her husband zeke still cheated on her and her sister still still fucked her sisters husband they all fucking cheated and they all fucking deserve to die just because she was married to a abusive prick who fucked her sister when ever he wanted and just cause her family didn't give 2 shits about her does not mean it can be justified her fucking another man 2 wrongs don't make a right she could have divorced him and cut her family out of her life not seduce and fuck another while still married so yes she is at fault and can be blamed and should be punished for the cheating and the only punishment suitable for cheating is death

This story sucks and I give it one star.

This story? Campy redneck humor gold! 5 stars

I knew Adam was the hero of this story for one simple reason - he drove a Mustang. LOL. Honestly, this story was a wild ride and not your typical "loving wives" content even if it did technically include a cheating wife.

I FUCKING LOVE IT!!!!!!! dream scenario right here kidnapped by someone head over heels for me and who will always be mine

Doesn’t seem anyone has a problem with Adam and the kidnapping and captivity and those “good military friends” doing their part.

To all you people that criticize “anonymous” readers for giving their honest opinions, that is what the writers want. Good or bad, writers don’tcare, if they did they can turn off the comments.