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All Comments on 'Beyond Redemption Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Love it~

Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
???

Overly shrouded with mystery until it was so confusing making the story so incomprehensible

LeftoverStoriesLeftoverStoriesover 14 years ago
Liked it, but...

That lonnnggggg masturbation scene needed to be broken up into smaller paragraphs. I kept losing my place and finally skipped it altogether.

EnclosedOneEnclosedOneover 12 years ago

very interesting chapter, definitely has captured my attention :)

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