All Comments on 'Billion Dollar Slaves 01 Ch. 01'

Don't stop, continue please. I think this one has potential.

Mike S.

Oh please, don't leave us hanging. There are so many great stories out there that have a first chapter and nothing more.

Please!!

Bring on chapter 2 love it!!!!!!!!!

I wrote many more chapters to this story and as long as people keep asking I'll keep submitting them. Chapter two and three are online now with 4 & 5 pending.

Thanks for the comments and the votes.

Dom Woolf

This is interesting. Very straightforward and to the point. You don't play around with too much detail and you give just enough background to make the characters interesting...

I'll be reading more in a moment.

Well has me hooked!!! On my way to read the rest. Can't wait to read last chapeter to see if you need more!