All Comments on 'Birthday Girl Ch. 2'

I really enjoyed this story, loved the entire stories. Like the way it developed. I wonder what Louise is up to now? Will you continue her escapades? She's a great teacher.

has nicely progressed where more of the characters are getting laid. Good stuff! Still have to get Lisa's dad into the mix somehow, and a swimming party and a "first timer" for Lisa, so the next chapter should be even better. This story is getting better as it progresses. Great job Frederick Carol! Thanks.

VERY GOOD - AS GOOD AS CHAPTER ONE. KEEP IT UP.

This story has developed in a very thoughtful way. Louise's seduction of Mike was very clever and the description of their sexual encounters exciting. (Where was Louise when I was growing up in the country??) Although I guessed that Louise would take Lisa to bed, showing her the same book that had excited Mike was a good ploy. All in all this is a very well written and enticing story. Looking forward to Ch. 3, and hoping for MANY more!

The story as it has developed so far is superb, both with the specific sex scenes and the dialogue and foreplay (both verbal and physical). I grew up in the West, apparently one state west of the setting here. Although I didn't have an older woman to show me the ropes I had some high school and college classmates who could relate to this - in living color. I'm looking forward to some more!