by Samuelx
This isn't an erotic story it's a racially charged rant full of stereotypes. Lame!
Mechanized strap-on with hot artificial cum? This is even worse than the usual stuff you write. Not to mention the completely misleading story title.
I find the writing style very impressive. Enjoyable to read, with a nice flow. It is a well reasoned narrative with a convincing expression of the contempt and anger that supposedly justfies the brutalization. As an erotic writing, this is more in the fetish zone and didn't do much for me. Still, it is an excellent writing sample. Keep writing, Samu'el.
THIS STORY IS NOT MY CUP OF TEA. Therefore, i shall refrain from voting.
This story is a few shades of gray too dark for my mildly kinky taste.
This is the same story you always write.
Paragraph 1: Main character introduces self by full name and exhaustively describes own ethnicity and life situation.
GARBAGE