All Comments on 'Black Slave on the Plantation'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I see that SHIT BRAIN is still

peddling his crap

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Boo Hiss

This isn't an erotic story it's a racially charged rant full of stereotypes. Lame!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
thank you!

very nice story, more please

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Unbelievably Bad

Mechanized strap-on with hot artificial cum? This is even worse than the usual stuff you write. Not to mention the completely misleading story title.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Very good style

I find the writing style very impressive. Enjoyable to read, with a nice flow. It is a well reasoned narrative with a convincing expression of the contempt and anger that supposedly justfies the brutalization. As an erotic writing, this is more in the fetish zone and didn't do much for me. Still, it is an excellent writing sample. Keep writing, Samu'el.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Your sentences run smoothly. Your writerscraft is very good. You very successfully depicted the inner workings of a racist-minded cop. However her workd views turned me off.

THIS STORY IS NOT MY CUP OF TEA. Therefore, i shall refrain from voting.

This story is a few shades of gray too dark for my mildly kinky taste.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
UTTER TRASH

This is the same story you always write.

Paragraph 1: Main character introduces self by full name and exhaustively describes own ethnicity and life situation.

GARBAGE

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I am Samuelx. I am Black. I am Male. I was born in Cap-Haitien, Northern Haiti, and raised in Brockton, Massachusetts. I now live in Canada. I am the one and only Haitian Trickster, and quite simply live only by my own rules. I...