All Comments on 'Blackmailing Becca Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
loved it

Great continuation. I think now it's time for her to serve as part of Albert's entertainment when he has poker night with his buddies. Or he can really start turning her into a slut taking her to the mall and pointing out different men for her to screw.

Looking forward to more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
NOT BAD...

perhaps its time for o'l Albert to start breaking in Becca's moma?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

Break in becca's mom.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

more chapters please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Get Becca pregnant

get her pregnant and let her help breaking her mom....

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Perhaps she could learn to spell for the next chapter?

Sometimes you get some of your punctuation correct:

"Becca's here now i'll put her on for you."

Should be

"Becca's here now, I'll put her on for you." - the possessive "I" is always a capital

And then, we get complete disasters, like this:

"I'm cumming in your mouth whore." He said as cum fulled the teenagers mouth, she swallowed as much as possible but as Albert pulled out some shot into Beccas hair.

Should be:

"I'm cumming in your mouth whore," he said, as cum filled the teenagers mouth. She swallowed as much as possible but as Albert pulled out some shot into Becca's hair.

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