All Comments on 'Blame it on Pattaya Ch. 03'

I enjoyed the story build up immensely and felt the story was very well developed. I really hope there is another part to this story because I was very disturbed by how you ended it. You built this up as a long time loving couple with kids. I understood his need for her open up and up, and until the end, I felt most of it was believable. But the scene at a dirty bar and then for her to stay there without him just seemed too unreasonable and too out of character. Anyone can lose it for a brief time, but to do a 180 for that length of time, for me, is not believable.. Also, having been to Thailand numerous times, the possibility of terminal diseases with this behavior is not only possible, but assured. Oh, I know, this is fiction porn and we can’t be bothered with realistic crap…but this story took a reality turn with me and I couldn’t ignore it. …JDL

It takes courage to end the story the way you did. I have not read the other parts but the build up in this chapter was actually very good. I agree that not all wives are sub-sluts and the wife in the story is not actually submissive and is actually quite assertive in her desires otherwise she would have gone back with her hubby.

Cheers

It ended just as it should have... appropriately, predictably, hopelessly mired in depravity. Be careful what you ask for!

.... I enjoyed this series but think Marge progressed (or descended?) unrealistically too quickly into such debauchery given her original stance or reserve. The initial fellatio could have been on the island without the cruelty. The initial fucking on the beach or their hotel room vs. in a public setting. In short, I would have much preferred slower evolution with perhaps a 4th or 5th chapter with the same result at the club including details about the black sailors moving in to fuck her and her realization that she was now to be fucked by two more men with BBC's and the couple's reactions to that new reality. Just sayin'.

Interesting story with a twist at the end. Wish there was one more chapter. Maybe he went back for his wife or she arrived home pregnant. Either from Hans or maybe a black guy she met. You've got a choice of several endings so wish there would be one more chapter to bring this story to a close.