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He nodded as she dropped her finger away to replace it with her dark lips in a passionate kiss. Rae hissed pleasantly once releasing him, her eyes no longer filled with pain but warmth. He was probably the only person those eyes would show such feelings for.
"Know then, my dear Patron... I love you more than any word in drow or any other language can ever describe."
He grinned in response and together they left the room and made their way to join the others up top. Blaze and Rae had no sooner reached the rest of their comrades when another pirate came running up to the group.
"Captain Red!" he said as he skidded to a halt, drawing everyone's attention. "It's just as you feared. On inspecting the ship, there are various small breaches in the hull, allowing water to slowly come into the Crimson Dawn."
Marissa Red cursed silently at the news spoiling their jovial mood in celebrating and remembering good times with their lost comrades. "Alright then, we set course west immediately before she sinks beneath our feet, leaving us to swim the rest of the way. Hopefully we can beach her on some land and make necessary repairs then."
"Shit!" Clarissa spat as she looked to the southwest. "We got a storm coming fast, sis. And it looks to be a bad one."
Everyone looked towards where the blonde half-lycan was staring and true to her word the skies in that direction were turning an ugly black with threatening clouds. And with each passing moment it grew all the more terrifyingly threatening.
"Can't we ride it out," Tyra asked with a frown.
"No," Marissa stated as she put a comforting hand on her sister's shoulder. "We've seen storms like this before and were lucky to live through them. This time, the Crimson Dawn will be torn asunder from the storm's fury."
"Move out!" Clarissa bellowed to the remaining crew. "Gather what remaining supplies you can and put them in the lifeboats! Then get them over and down into the water fast!"
The crew scrambled immediately as Blaze and his friends helped the sisters hoist up the smaller boats, but only two of them since so few of them remained. The skies turned darker as the storm clouds blocked out the sun. Thunder rolled across them in announcement of its close proximity as they began to lower the boats into the sea, which was becoming very turbulent.
Once the boats were in the water, the crew scrambled down one ladder into one boat while he and his friends climbed into the other as the rain began to fall. The rain came down so hard that it stung on his skin and made him grind his teeth against the uncomfortable feeling. He was simply amazed at how fast and ferocious this storm blew in. Winds tore at them and their boats now as the increasingly larger waves bounced them about as they cut their lines to free them from the ship.
"BLAZE!" Marissa screamed above the howling wind and threw them a rope. She was trying to keep them together during the storm. He lunged to grab it but was tossed back into Nadine as a wave slammed their boat into the side of the leaning Crimson Dawn.
"LOOK OUT!" screamed Clarissa as their boat was forced further away from them in the driving storm. Blaze looked up and his eyes widened in horror. The waves must have torn into the weakened hull and filled one side of the ship. Now the Crimson Dawn leaned heavily on its side over their heads and was beginning to come crashing down.
"DIVE!" he roared. All five of them instantly dove overboard as the warship came crashing down on them. Water surrounded him and he struggled to swim away as the Crimson Dawn sank below the surface, trying to drag him down with her to a dark grave in the sea. He didn't remember much after that as he swirled about in the chaotic sea as darkness took him.
Blaze coughed and spluttered when he woke suddenly, lying face down in the sand of some beach he must have washed ashore on. Weakly, he managed to lift his head just enough to see Kendra lying not far off unconscious but breathing and alive. Of the others he did not see. This wasn't good, he thought before blacking out once again...
- COMMENTS
WhitePaintover 7 years agoShouldn't tyra's nightmare contain failure of her duties as a guardian. The topic of her being a monster never came before. There are many freaky looking non-human races in Aidan so I don't think she had any problem with her looks so far. Kendra even talked to her at sanjay when her failure was bothering her. Just a question, obviously you know better. Anyway enjoying the story immensely, read first 7 chapters in a day. It got me hooked pretty bad. You are a gifted writer with a good imagination which makes the story all much interesting. Good luck mate!
ShadwNinjaXover 9 years agoAuthorThe Natori Pact was one that the gods made after the incredible destruction and incredible loss of life that came about in the war with the Natori. Some world suffered so greatly that even now many of the neutral and good gods are hesitant or reluctant to intervene. Evil gods could care less or find it amusing. Even at the cost of massive life, these eternal beings may think that with time the world can come back to a balanced state even if it means a few centuries under evil's reign. Foolhardy, perhaps but they swore the pact for fear of nearly destroying the entire world once again. That is if they are knowledgeable enough to know about and work within the loophole that Koas has found. Stavros and Eilistraee are the only two so far that are both knowing of this loophole and finding ways to work within it.
superfeluously_eover 9 years agoWhat's up with the gods acting like bitches? I know there is a pact but if one god is dead set on annihilating every race there is, all of which worship different gods, why don't these gods say screw it, murder the evil god, and then rewrite the pact if need be?
Anonymousabout 10 years agoIf you cant handle the fact that he's getting so much pussy then just switch to another story. I will agree that the event with Kaoses servants does get predictable because they have to deal with evil races. But oh fucking well its a Grade A+ story out of all the other stories on this website. I have a shitload of a list to compare it to others. But I did have a laugh when he realized oh crap I didn't think about getting one of the women pregnant or all of them for that matter of fact. That was funy as hell.
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoAt one point in this chapter, Blaze considers the possibility of his wimminz getting pregnant.
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
So all the times he was having sex with them, probably multiple times per day judging by their libidos, and never using any sort of protection or pulling out or anything (disregarding blowjobs and the like), he NEVER considered that 'hey, maybe supplying these fertile females with ridiculous quantities of sperm straight into their uterus multiple times per day will get one or more of them pregnant?'
HAHAHAHAHA...
Oh man. That's funny. Heh.
That said, I also find slight fault with this story in that he's been stated repeatedly to share this deep love for all his companions, but literally all he's done is have sex with them. Kendra? Oh mah gawd green eyes so pretteh I luv dem so much I can partially counteract seduction-based hypnosis. Yet I can't think of a single scene in which Blaze does anything but fight alongside or fuck her. Same with basically every other female character. Not that this is a bad thing; sex is what the story is based on, it just makes Blaze's relationship with them rather implausible at best. Also, the sex scene styles are rather predictable based on the character's status as hero or villain. If hero, the character will either be in a situation that makes them have to bang Blaze or they will simply be compelled to by libido. If villain, as with Lexxis and Sonara or however you say her name, they're sent by Koas to (location) to get (ally). In order to do so, they're forced to do something horrible, like getting raped by an entire army of orcs or goblins or being forced to strip tease a bunch of giants or being raped by an illithid. And this happens every single time.
It gets a bit predictable, though you have been getting better about that.
Also, if the harem loves Blaze so much that they would die for him, why is it that whenever he so much as looks lust fully at another woman (see Aphrodite), they punch him in the face with enough force to leave him in a crater in the ground? Eventually they're going to kill him and that'll end the series.
