by dusty_gurly
A very special and hot tale of true devotion. Excellent! Keep it up!
Since this feels like the first chapter of something more, I'll treat it as such.
Nicely written and the flow of the story is clear and understandable.
Look forward to more.
An exquisite portrayal of a sub's feelings with her loving master. A pleasure to read.
and devotion in your words.....this is one lucky dom! as are the readers of your story.
What a lucky person you are to be able to write so explicitly and make everything so beautiful. Would love to read more.
little tale of the delights of power and submission. Tastefully written. Well done