by Dead_Strings
This story has a great deal of potential. However, it is severely in need of some thorough editing.
(quite v. quiet; their v. they're; etc, etc, etc)
(And punctuation! Now that would be a concept.)
Poor baby I really hope Aren will find a nice girl to hug up against, and will no longer feel this jealousy when he do. Good start btw, I hope you post very soon.