All Comments on 'Blood Moon Ch. 02'

I'm so intrigued with the way this story is starting out hope you continue quickly.

Still some awkward sentence structure but you are improving. Keep it up!

keep going.

I realyy enjoyed reading this chapter. This is turning out very unique and interesting. Only one, little suggestion...please make your chapters just a bit longer.

Still good, still needs some editing. I didn't notice so many long paragraphs, and that's much easier on the eyes. I find it a little hard to believe that in six years (Syra became a vampire at fifteen, right? then later it's stated that she's 21) Syra has become the 2nd best agent at this place. But it makes for a good premise.

I just bloody love this story.am a bit miffed that he doesn't like her.

I absolutely adore this story! I hope you continue soon. Though I love Dominic, I'm liking how mischievous Prince Lucian can be :)

The story is captivating. I really want to know when did she meet Dominic...was it only through work she knows him? Why did he hide his being a prince?

I think an editor would be good b/c there are quite a few mistakes and it detracts from such a great story...with all the work that goes into writing a story like this, it would be good to make sure small things like grammar and spelling mistakes are fixed.

I look forward to reading on!

They are few grammar errors to be fix but all good. Its good story which is I like. :)

yep im liking the take on this story .. she still needs to toughen up and i wish Dom was more like his brother.. he's playful in a wicked way :)

I'm liking this story but you NEED an editor and a proofreader.....