by Collete
Well, great start anyway. Seems like all you really did is set the scene then stop just as the main part of the tale is starting. Still, solid 4 stars
...try to avoid anachronisms in fantasy tales---the word 'autopilot' jarred simply because it is an ill-placed concept in this story. Apart from that, very good.
I really liked your story. It was sweet and fresh and kind. It also had good pacing and was very well written. Thank you.
As a male, octopus-women have turned me on as well. Maybe one of her sisters can rescue a man.
Quick, quiet and kind.
Very nice. Please feel free to continue the story or write more of your imaginings.