All Comments on 'Blue Moon Rising Ch. 04'

Looking forward to your next chapter. Please post it soon.

Loving your story. One page one I was thinking to myself we have weres and witches, now all we need is vampires; you threw them in as well.

The one small thing is that occassionally you jump from one scene to the next. I am often finding that very disconcerting. A few symbols in the paragraph break would help me here.

For example:

Once there, Libby cheerfully constructed Kate's demise.

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We drove home from Sonny's in a gluttonous stupor. Actually, I was the only o

I love your writing. One thing you jump from one person to another without warning. It takes a second to realize who your writing about.

Curious as to the hate/aid relationship between Libby and Aiden.

Also wondering how Zoe fits into the picture.

I wish you good luck and hope that you will continue on with this story.

Thanks for posting.

more and more and more, please.

Yes I know this is what everyone else is asking so I'll just add my own ...more please!! I really enjoy your writing and the story is def getting interesting..I know it takes time to write, however I hope it is not too long between chapters...thanks for sharing your thoughts..luv em

im really liking the story!! if possible, when ur writing, to indicate when the scene changes.... i got a little confused @ the beginning when the scene jumped from Libby in the attic to Ian & Katie.

i really cant wait to see what happens next in the story!!!

please don't stop writing!!! i love the stories and I can't wait to find out what happen next!

Please finish the story. You have a wonderful talent and I was sucked in enough the first time I read it that I forgot to add you to my favorites. Another point of how awesome this is, is that I remembered the story name(I love BlueMoon Beer lol) and found it and was uber disappointed to not see more :(

At any rate, loved it, please finish, you are awesome.

... it would be better if it was finished.

Don't keep us hanging.

I'll finish. I just have to wait for winter to set in.

Thank you all for reading and for the encouraging comments!

xo

ive been reading tonight and really want the rest of this story.... please get to writing because my mind is in overdrive trying to come up with possibilities as to how things will end. Slightly disappointed that Ian would be unable to change her and stay together -how soppy of me - but other than that, loved it.

cant wait to read the rest please write it soon please

I was loving this story until you had the Lizzy wanting to tear our couple apart that just turned me of your story which is a pity because apart from that it is awesome!