by meathead96
Wow... Started out with such a novel story line and progressed neatly to..... To where? It seems like we missed out at the end. I thought the bobbing was the wind up, not the climax
Really well written, but I felt I wanted more! I wanted to hear how the other characters that you had built up got on, and for it to go on a bit longer. Shame cause I was really getting into it!
Nice start to a novel story idea just wish it didn't just end with only Trish having an orgasm what about the other party goers?
Since the outcry for more of the story, I'm working hard on part number 2. Will have it posted as quick as possible! Thanks for reading and voting!
The name of the story is intriguing, but the idea of a swinging party, with partners chosen by chance is not a new one. At the same time, the method of selecting partners is novel, although I can't help thinking a committed couple, if there was one at the party, would not have been willing to switch like that. All in all, a good read.
That was a really nice story. Some of the stories are very good and different from others and this was one such story. Hope you will finish the second part soon. And, Good luck for contest.