by Sarah28
Your story is very uncommun in this category. It seams so real, it sound so right that I don't doubt it is true somehow. In fact, taht last part wher you give a follow up on the character is what troubled me.
Even when someone finds non cosncent stories exciting, it doesn't mean that he approuved or is not touch by the real world.
Good work, please write more
This was a great story, when treated as a piece of fiction, knowing that the character is based on a real person makes me feel guilty for having enjoyed it so much. I hope Staci gets away and retakes control of her life.
Very good detail and characterization. Loved the way you presented her feelings.