All Comments on 'Brad's Road Trip Ch. 09'

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cutedaddy69 7 days ago

I was fearing it'd get monotonous, but you keep the fires burning. Good writing, real characters. Less mechanics needed AFAIC, but that's just me i'm sure.. tx

Old_Lion 11 days ago

Damn. I looooove tall women. I know and feel the Kelly link but I connected with Maria. Sad.

arrowglass over 9 years ago

I mant to give 5 stars

Sorry...accidentally clicked on the 4stars instead of 5!

Anonymousover 11 years ago

Well done!

As a woman, I'd kick my boyfriend's ass for that but for story telling purposes it worked quite nicely. :)

Sorry, still anonymous til I figure out my password or take the time to reset it.

~LilTX

Romantic1 over 11 years ago

Great job Spot

I'm so glad Brad is back on the road. You capture something special in your writing. Five stars, of course!

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May 9, 2024 -- The Scavenger Hunt is in full swing now, published through Chapter 5! Chapter 6 will be a few days still, due to my editor having, ya know, a life or something, but I would expect by the end of next week, and then 7 will be along a couple weeks later. It's a b...

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