All Comments on 'Breaking in The New Boyfriend'

A good story and great fun to see the girl in charge. I recommend more 'showing' the characters' reactions as opposed to 'telling.' This makes for more emotional writing. Good work and please post more.

that ends up face down in the gutter. Where she belongs.

The text was vivid, the story hot, the main character, Rachel had the kind of humor I like. I will just put this among my favourites.

Wonderfully written story. Evocative! Thank you!

I don't get that negative comment at all. I thought it was one of the hottest stories I have read in a while and would like MORE.

Write more please I love it going to share with my friends

well written as well as hottter than hell this old guy had the best erection in some time thanks Lass

i will sure revisit this story ;) ;)

This story Holds your attention From the very beginning to the end, Is well-written and really grabs you Hold your attention and you want more and more

I love the idea of being 'broken in'... thanks for the best new fantasy I've had in ages!

Tim never heard the saying, 'never sleep with anyone crazier than yourself".

He was gone. He had played with her, used her for his pleasure and then left her. After all she was only good as a sex toy and he had gotten his fill of her and no longer wanted to be bothered by the cunt. The end.