All Comments on 'Breaking Kay'

An eloquently done piece, from a perspective that is not only intriguing but also intense; very nicely done!

I thought the use of the whip as the narrating voice was very creative. That's why I gave you points. However, I fail to see how breaking a woman's spirit can be a positive thing. Where are the safe words? This man could care less about the well being of this woman or any other woman. He is only interested in his self serving ego

A POV piece that really was wonderful. The annon comment was from someone who has never understood the liberation of "breaking". Kyrie knows. Kay knows and now is more than she was before.

Well written and beautiful. Thank you.

I loved this story told from the perspective of Mr Whip. I would love to be in Kay's position. I trust that I would be able to take a flogging of that intesity. I guess that just like Kay I would have no say in what happened - the flogging would happen whether I could take it or not. It really does turn me on. Now that would seem to be a very unusual thing to say to any who are not in the BDSM scene. Maybe I could be the one weilding the whip until Kay broke. That interests and excites me as well.

This would be fantastic but for the reluctance your have reached for coming across as dubious consent. There needed to be more seduction and enticement on his part to draw her in. The idea of 'breaking' someone is also negative. Why not break open or freeing someone. Why would a sane person want a broken person?