All Comments on 'Brenda's Learns the Truth'

That was really hot, and also very well written! Keep going, I want to know what hapens when she finally hooks up with Tina!

I've read this twice so far, and I love it! It's long but completely and worth the read. Please keep this story line coming!

Great set up. I hope Jake gets to pound her into oblivion.

Some great erotic moments in the angst. I enjoyed the self-discovery, but want to see where it goes with some self-acceptance and less drinking.

...that you make a follow-up to this story. I wanna see what happens to Brenda next!

It is a great story. I couldn't stop reading!!! You MUST write more!!!!!

Please more

This was either a recount of a real experience or you have a fertile imagination! Great character development, good plot, descriptive sex, and emotions. I was vested in the story and characters. Great job!

Just read this story twice, loved it. Please keep writing more. Brenda needs a sequel !

For a first attempt this is very good, the emotional side a little strong but overall good.

Keep at it, it will get better.

This story needs a good proofreader because there are a number of problems that detract from the story.

OK maybe the title of the story gives it away. Or the character of Brenda adamantly regards same-sex love as wrong. But as a college student couldn’t she come to see this as ‘experimenting’ instead of black/white, straight/gay, right/wrong? She could like What she does with Steven AND what she does with Kelly. She’s not gay, she’s having fun and discovering her sexuality, no matter the sex of her partner.

Rereading my comment I feel the need to add that I am not against the possibility that she might be gay. But if she had fun with Kelly and with Steven maybe she could accept being bi- or at least bi-curious?

This story is GREAT!!! It is surprising that she didn't go to Tina after Steven. Of course, I usually lean towards "happily ever after"

Confusing.