All Comments on 'Briget Ch. 01'

for a "first" story?

CONGRATULATIONS for the beginning of an excellent "fantasy".

(I LOVE Denny & Briget, yeah, and Eva too <blush>!) Who wouldn't want to be this guy, -or- this gal? And you've established good groundwork for easy expansion. I'll absolutely be watching for NEW chapters, and thanks for writing, VelvetHammer!!

Pretty fucken hot, dude. Keep it up!

Hot action,I love Irish girls

and the story came together well.

I know a story is hot when I find myself reaching down and stroking myself while reading a story. Please continue writing, as you are certainly turning a lot of people on with your stories!