All Comments on 'Broken'

Another unfinished story

Hope to see a new chapter soon.

Please continue this soon!!!!!!!!

Don't wait long between chapters. Stories that tie disparate threads together need to be told with haste to maintain reader interest. Good stuff so far.

I'll look for new chapters of this. So far it seems good. I hope you'll continue in the same direction.

a very interesting and intriguing start to a story ... looking forward to more :-)

Intriguing cant wait to find out more

Good start. I'm hooked.

I like this story. Keep going.

I'm ready to read the next chapter.

cool im interested ....keep going