All Comments on 'Builders Slut Ch. 05'

What a wonderful submissive world

Congratulations on a fabulous final chapter! As with the others, the temperature and urgency with which you embraced your debasement was told with appropriate heat and detail. Although I would have loved to hear the details of you taking Cameron's thick cock up your slut ass, I will live comfortably with the image in my head.

Thanks for sharing your lurid and debauched tale!

I would have loved an account of that hour or two before leaving the bedroom. The ending a bit rushed without it. Again you interchanged Lee and Carl. Please proof read and proof again aloud! That being said you are truly talented and I've enjoyed these stories immensely. Thank you!

Oh so enjoyable. A pure pleasure from a submissive with great story telling skills. Dont stop you have my interest

Jean

Natalie, you should submit to the readers too. All of us. You are our wordwhore now x

She gave it all up too early and the story is kind of deadended now

"1*" !!

I loved this - and despite what the other commentators said I think it got better and better as it went along.

An impressive debut and a good insight into your character.

I look forward to reading more and seeing where your imagination takes you next.

The story of an accomplished woman wanting nothing more than to be a worthless slut is old and done with, get a more modern and relatable angle

natalie I know you haven't written anything in a long time but I just got to read this. it sooo parallels what I have been feeling the last couple of years since recognizing and giving in to my submissiveness. thank you for putting into words my thoughts, I will read everything you've written!

kacey

This story was almost believable and a great fantasy, thank-you. It chimes so well with how being humiliated really turns me into a submissive automaton.

As I’ve read the chapters of this story I’ve come to realise just how much you enjoy being a slut. It almost seems as though you have been set free to do what you are good at. Your writing style also seems to flow easier the more you realise that being a whore is your calling in life. I plan on taking my time reading all your stories and allowing you the pleasure of me telling you how much you get me off. You now know a little of who I am from the chat site as previously mentioned, and I hope the thought of getting to know each other a little better makes you want to indulge in some more whorish behaviour and write it all down for the readers to admire

Well written series, extremely hot, knowing these events having taken place.... and your journey to being a real slut