All Comments on 'Business Negotiations'

by Clohi

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HughJardHughJardabout 19 years ago
Wonderful...

Wonderful...well written, with great passion. I loved it!

onyxessenceonyxessenceover 17 years ago
Mediocre

There wasn't any actual group sex here, WTH? One paragraph at the end suddenly counts? This story is in the wrong place. Everything happens too fast, and it wasn't sensual enough to justify 6 orgasms. It started off well enough but fell off steeply when you started describing the sex. Oh well, better luck to you next time!

Also, that's not how you spell "Chloe" -- but I guess the person in the story is you?

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