All Comments on 'By the River'

I'm not just referring to this piece, but your writing in general and overall; you're a talented writer. What I particularly enjoy is the way in which you draw the reader in until it seems as if we are almost sitting on your lap, well I can but hope.

I am starting to write for Lit and hopefully I can persuade you to read my stuff as it gets on the site. More importantly though is how can I persuade you to reply, so that we can keep in touch? Any suggestions please send to london_james2010@yahoo.co.uk

Thanks a lot and best of luck

James

PS The fantastic also refer to the photo, wow!!

Fabulous story - I would LOVE to have walked in on you

M

Story is too short needs more development. However it is a good idea and short outline of what could be a great story.