All Comments on 'Cabin Vacation Ch. 01'

It's unusual to see a story told as if the writer is speaking directly to the reader, but this worked pretty well. One typo, though. I'm pretty sure you meant "nether regions" and not "neither regions."

If you can't tell the difference between "were" and "where", you have no business touching a keyboard.

Good story, love your story line. She can squeeze my dick any time. This is Literotica not English 101, write like you enjoy it. There are some people who just hurt themselves while reading other peoples stories. Good luck.