All Comments on 'Caitlin and Sara Ch. 04'

Another great story by Babylez, I like them all but this was wonderful and the end has tremendous potential. Keep up the great work!!!!

baby, your writing...

ahh...

Sweet? yes, yes, yes

Erotic? truly

The twist at the end? delightful

Thank You

Baby you are the best.

I wish the story never ends here. A real fascinating story with all the essential ingredients and a perfect narrative style. One of the finest stories I have ever read from such a classy author.

Please write more. Don't keep us waiting so long to get the next installment.

I liked how you brought Sara'a husband into the picture. There's nothing like building a little anticipation for the next part.

Also, Cat's mom seems to be into the alternative lifestyle. Why not have her paired with a female lover as well.

I just read all 4 chapters and loved them all. I sure didn't see that ending coming. Please don't keep us waiting to long.

Love it love it love it. love every single one of your stories. youre my favorite author i have read on here by far!

I have read nearly every story you have written and they were great. My favorites though are the Sara and Catlin stories. The last chapter had a great ending, please don't keep me waiting for the next installment.

What a wonderful chapter!! Lesser authors would've jumped immediately into the Mom watching (and probably participating), but instead, you told a much better tale, showing us the process of Cat and Sara reacting to Mom's request, each in turn and each well-developed and unrushed. And then the ending? About the VERY last thing I expected to happen. The unexpected plot twist and cliffhanger that outdoes the cliffhanger at the end of chapter 3. Once again, you show us all that you are not merely someone who slaps together the words of a fantasy. No, YOU are an author and a storyteller. And a gifted one!

Another exceptional chapter. Thank you again for writing for us.

Very sensual and erotic. Can't wait for the next chapter !!

I have read most of your stories. They are all really well written.

I really liked the story and how the characters are intertwined. The love scenes are really erotic. Can't wait to see what happens. Don't leave us hanging too long!!!!

You truly are my favorite author on Lit. PLEASE don't make me wait too long for the next chapter.

ONCE AGAIN....YOU HAVE DONE IT....I ENJOY READING YOUR STORIES...SO VERY MUCH...HOPEFULLY YOU WILL BE ABLE TO CONTINUE TO WRITE...

HUGS..

DRAGONFLY

Thank god! You did not disappoint in this chapter. Very good. And I'm so exceed to read about what greg thinks about all this lol.

Still loving every bit of this story then you ratchet it up several levels with the last sentence. I'm moving to the last chapter right now excited to see where this leads!

To this reader, the most realistic chapter since the first. A lot of genuine expression of feeling. I like the entire scene between Sara and Caitlin regarding Colleen's discovery and what she said to Caitlin. I don't like the shoddy way that Sara chose to tell her husband that it is all over between them, but maybe that is because I cannot identify with Sara's feelings regarding him. Anyway, I look forward to the final chapter.

I am loving this story. One thing that has disappointed me though. In Chapter 1, Sara squirted copious amounts that Cat discovered she loved. What happened? Nowhere in the following chapters has she squirted since, or do we assume she still does but you don't bother to tell us??

Can't wait to see what mommy sees