by Rmastyx
Wow!!! You are turning into a very good author which is a very good sign. Outstanding story, very well written. 10 on 10 from me. Keep writing, you are doing an outstanding job. Thank you for the story and good luck for your future projects.
An amazing combination of tenderness and passion. You made Candice and Matt come to life, and then let us share such an intimate and powerful moment. Thank you.
You need to learn the difference between a coma and a period. You had way too many run-on sentences.