by Bakeboss
poorly executed. The poor grammar, and rather unbelievable storyline (our hero, well not hero, but some really clever engineer with priapism gets picked to breed with the queen of the Amazons) combine with the scant details of the characters (all we know is that the Queen's beauty could make any man forget he was about to be killed) and lead us nowhere: no eroticism, no tension, no passion. Please, please, please try again.
who likes to read about a coward this story im sorry to say is one of the dumbest stories I have read so far if your going to write about the past you think modern and atlantis what's with that you make it like a cheap porno that's how dumd it was
no imagination in this story it's always the week male and the big strong woman,I guess femininest stories are suppose to be hot I find dumb because the man always meek and don't forget cowardly or arrogant or weasly they all read the same is that the recipe to all Amazon stories
When a story relay's on sex 'its not a very good story ,if your into being a womens sex slave 'Braf'fine if you like that kind of stuff.