All Comments on 'Caribbean Contract Ch. 04-06'

by tbabyhot

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tellstory2jaketellstory2jakeover 13 years ago
Captivating...

My mind and body are yours to control. Swept away by the intense images you create with your words. Those images that take form within my mind.. becoming more real than the world that surrounds me. I know the feeling that Stan experienced as Jessica disappeared at the end of the chapter... now I too must wait.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
We need more

You have me captivated with this story line and I see so many possibilities. Please hurry with the next chapter I can't wait to see where you go next.

tbabyhottbabyhotabout 13 years agoAuthor
Thank You ♥

I had to take a break, but I am working on Chapter 7... all I will say is, it starts with a dream ! ♥ Thank you ♥

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