by aygoslow
This is very well crafted, and John is one lucky guy.
Aaaaaand you just lost me. OK, not true, you lost me at making him run naked then taking everything he owned and his work. But I thought you might pull it out. Good writing, ridiculous concept.
Oh great, here we go into total unbelievable fantasy, Had enjoyed the first couple of this series then the plot just got too far fetched.