All Comments on 'Carrie and John Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I like the way this is going!

This is very well crafted, and John is one lucky guy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Aaaaaand you just lost me. OK, not true, you lost me at making him run naked then taking everything he owned and his work. But I thought you might pull it out. Good writing, ridiculous concept.

greenman440greenman440over 5 years ago
off the rails

Oh great, here we go into total unbelievable fantasy, Had enjoyed the first couple of this series then the plot just got too far fetched.

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