All Comments on 'Casandra's Party Ch. 01'

While i enjoyed the story i do have one small comment to make, and that is it started from her perspective, then moved to a 'third person' perspective, and finally to his perspective without any warning

A page break (**********), or extra lines between the changes in perspectives would have made it an easier read

- to a writer I'm sure will become very popular indeed! As a first effort, this was magnificent - thank you. There are people who will offer you sound advice, like the previous poster; listen to them and not the 'knockers' and you will do fine.

Thanks to the one's who have read and liked the story, I am in the process of writing chapter 2 ... hopefully it will be longer and any ideas of things that you would like to maybe see in the story are always appreciated ... I not only write the stories as a release but I also write them for you the readers ... till next time Thank You and Goodbye!