All Comments on 'Casino Plot Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
excellent story

mcfbridge is a very exciting author. The way he builds the story line is so good. Cant wait for the next instalment.

sidestreetsidestreetabout 19 years ago
Casino Plot

Once again you have excelled yourself, i do love the way your mind works, cant wait for the next instalment.

txrosenaynaytxrosenaynayalmost 18 years ago
time

to read on...thank you for sharing your talent with us. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
SMALL, PERT TITS ARE NICE TOO!

They don't all have to be DD's, etc. I think cute small tits would be perhaps even more embarassing to reveal. The Korean might have been perfect for a set of "B's." Looking forward to more being revealed literally and figuratively (puns intended).

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Racial stereotyping always a blast

"Being Asian she was the shyest"

mcfbridgemcfbridgealmost 6 years agoAuthor
Racial Stereotype

Actually, it was more a cultural stereotype. From my experience, given the value, or lack thereof of women in most Asian cultures, they do tend to be shyer or quieter than average. But of course that is not true of all Asian women simply because they are Asian. I have to concede that was not my best written sentence. Assigning her a quality simply because of her ethnicity was not the best choice.

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