All Comments on 'Casino Plot Ch. 05'

This story is great! Does that mean we won't see Sue Lynn in a couple installments? Oh well.

A minor nit-pick if you accept. The numbers don't quite add up. (Yes, I'm a number freak). Easiest solution is award 300 more points to Gertie in round 4, and have her end with 4,700. (and the poppers really hosed a couple-women, but that's luck of the draw) ;)

After this really minor quip (I insist I'm a number freak), The story is still great, the humilliation can be felt, And I'm sure we all eagerly await the next installment)

Good Job

I love this series and its been over a month since the last installment :(

To all of you who have emailed me, yes I do plan to finish this. I hope to have the next chapter up soon, it's about 2/3 written. I apologize for the delay, but life has just intervened and swallowed up most of my writing time. Please bear with me, chapter 6 will be up in the next few weeks.

but we need a new chaper!!

I find these stories more amusing than erotic. I am starting to think its a little unrealistic though. Pussy poppers? Pussy and ass washing chairs? I also think u are drawing the chapters out a little too much. But still loving it

The ass washing machines are a very interesting concept--bravo!