All Comments on 'Casting Call Ch. 02'

Way over the top! This was so unbelievable it was unbelievable. You need to get a grip.

Amazing. Chapter 1 was pretty darn good, aside from a few writing flaws. But in Chapter 2, your Alison character has a complete change of personality. And the story line loses the cuteness, and becomes just another "I'll do anything" piece of fluff.

-- KK in Texas

Wedding? I mean, Chapter Two was so hot! Now there's a wedding? God, I love weddings. So many contrasts, so many possibilities. Virgin white gowns, a beautiful bride waiting for the groom, hoping he won't see the cum stains or detect the aroma of sperm on her breath. Ooooooh!

A good fun story that made even an old dick like mine react just a little bit. I don't know why the previous reviewers knocked this story, but I hope that author keeps on submitting. Everybody that writes porn isn't a Nicholson Baker, so give the guy some slack.

A good fun story that made even an old dick like mine react just a little bit. I don't know why the previous reviewers knocked this story, but I hope that author keeps on submitting. Everybody that writes porn isn't a Nicholson Baker, so give the guy some slack.

Hope you write a lot more, I’ll be looking for them!