by ChrissieLecker
What a hot, delicious beginning to a story I am eager to see continued. The characters are well-described, and that minx with the strawberry blonde curls just leaps off the screen and comes to life. I wholeheartedly enjoyed this; you managed to combine a good storyline with great imagery and intelligent dialogue.
awesome start to this very hot horny story.
can't wait to read more. this really is so much fun to read
more parts are needed.
but the first commentator (and many others) should learn a story cant be "horny"...