by ChrissieLecker
but the first commentator (and many others) should learn a story cant be "horny"...
awesome start to this very hot horny story.
can't wait to read more. this really is so much fun to read
more parts are needed.
What a hot, delicious beginning to a story I am eager to see continued. The characters are well-described, and that minx with the strawberry blonde curls just leaps off the screen and comes to life. I wholeheartedly enjoyed this; you managed to combine a good storyline with great imagery and intelligent dialogue.