by WhiteMyst
when are you going to post the next chapter?
soon I hope..really liked this story. Can't wait for the next one!
i have never been left so wet from a mere story. i eagerly await the next chapter in what is proving to be an absolutely fantastic story. KEEP WRITING!!!
That was wonderful! It was so hot; I absolutely love it! I really like Micheal's character, and Jasmyne is very likable. (However, you might want to reconsider her name. It's not totally improbable, but if she comes from a "small country town," she's not so likely to have such an exotic name. Of course, I really like the name Jasmyne, I'm just not sure that it fits.) But either way, please do continue it soon!