Caught In the Limelight

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Minutes passed but finally they cleared their heads and caught their breathing, and then it was time to get dressed and go home.

Crystal looked down at Penny and reached down as Penny raised her head and kissed her, tasting her musk on Penny's lips. "That was wonderful, Luv, absolutely wonderful. Thank you, Penny," she said.

"You're welcome, Crystal. I enjoyed eating your pussy, and I truely enjoyed being your model today. If you ever need me, just get in touch with Ashley. She knows where to find me," said Penny as she walked over to Ashley.

"Well, Ashley, that was quite a threesome. Wasn't it?" said Penny as she took Ashley into her loving arms and just held her close, feeling their sweaty bodies pressing against one another.

"Yes, it was really something," said Ashley, and then she leaned close to Penny's ear and whispered, "I love you."

"I love you, too, Ashley. So very much," said Penny.

"Not to break things up ladies, but I do have a large shower off to the right, so we can wash this sweat from our bodies, get into our street clothes, and go home," said Crystal.

"Sounds good to us," replied Ashley and Penny.

It was dark by the time the three of them left Crystal's studio, and there was a bright, full moon overhead. Crystal went to the back of the studio to get her auto, and Ashley and Penny went to get into her car at curbside. Ashley opened the passenger door for Penny, but before getting into her seat, Penny turned and said, "You know, Ashley, I spent most of this long day in the limelight, but now here alone with you beside, I'm in the moonlight."

Maggie Red Rose

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ei62ei62about 1 year ago

the line regarding the rising inflection so typical of the Irish ,Scotish and English ." What about the "Welsh" you fucking ignoramus ,the Welsh are the most famous sing,song language of all ,Im also struggling with your repeated descriptions about just every thing. You leave nothing to the imagination,and that is what reading is all about

ei62ei62about 1 year ago

I know this a pure stroke fantasy but ,but the author goes on and on about the same things and if the main character is married they make serious decisions Together, a fact the lesbian boutique assistant and authour should know . So come on Maggie a little realistic

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

To be completely honest this story needs a lot of work. The sentence flow was really choppy and difficult to get through and the dialog was stiff and unrealistic. You also tried to force way too much detail, sometimes leaving a little to the reader's imagination is good. Also, try not to constantly say the same things over and over again, your reader won't forget about Penny's wonderful cleavage in the sentence right after the one about her cleavage.

jclementjclementover 13 years ago
Not Bad At All!

One of the better "Wham, bam, thank you, Ma'am!" I have read. Enjoyed it!

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