All Comments on 'Caught Naked'

The story is rushed and has too many grammatical errors.

A fair story spoilt by spelling errors and poor grammar

But....what you need to do is, write down your storyline and get more descriptive then READ your story and correct it to the best of your ability, THEN submit it ! My wife has got "caught" naked many times, as was I, but it has all been intentional ! We both love being naked and being seen naked and have no qualms about getting naked in front of other people. In fact my wife has taken what little clothes she does sometime wear off in a couple of bars we frequent. Don't give up. Develope some interesting situations . Show your wife off, and tell us about it ! BARE469

The story is not bad but is full of errors. I have a program that reads a paper back to me and I can catch most of the errors. Then get someone else to read it.

I had to stop reading this because the bad grammar and sentence structure were hurting my brain.