by Galloglaich
man, this is badass! i cant wait till the next chapter and is jack some kind of uber-incubus because anathene remade him? anyway, keep up the good work because this series is definitely an attention grabber.
This was a great addition to the continuation of the story no need to apologize for the lack of sex it was a excellent way to continue the story without going overboard.
Its great that you left sex out, for a more mature development and further broadening of character.
I'm pretty sure Jack's outbursts are the most annoying thing I've ever read. Really detracts from the story.
Just so you know I keep reading these for the story as much as if not more than the sex. Sex is everywhere on this site, a good story and is priceless. Thanks.
sex is just.. you know... but this.... yeah ... it's good.
You're stories are great. As a previous user said. We read just as much for the story. How/e, I've actually gotten so in engrossed in your stories I read mostly for the story and less for the sex. You're very talented. Don't let anyone put your stories down for lack of sex. Not to say you shouldn't add some with this being an erotic story site. But you more than make up for none with a gripping storyline.
(Also, I realize this story is probably finished. But I do still like to leave comments here and there to point out some positive things about your stories. I hope you enjoy my small amateur reviews. I should really log into my account next time I do this so you don't think I'm just some creeper outta nowhere...)
I had to scan through the story/chapter to confirm, but it's true. Everything fresh in my mind was from previous chapters. I read 7 chapters a couple of days ago, and I picked up again today, so I didn't realise it!
Probably most important is the fact that this chapter is no less of an enjoyable read. (That was probably more of an issue at the time that it was posted.) However, another thought that comes to mind is the fact that it becomes a minute issue when the story has been completed, and we can enjoy it in its entirety!
I'm not done reading today!