All Comments on 'Chantay's Surprise'

This is pure crap

Utter rubbish

Do not go near a keyboard and attempt this ever again ..I gave you a 00 because there was nothing lower .. just stop ..

I think with more details, an editor, and less rush, this story could be quite good.

Don't give up writing just because your first story didn't get great reviews. Next time put more time into it and make use of the editor's forum.

I can't imagine what fault you "critics" are finding! Its original, has a cute twist and the sex is great without being gross--what else do you need?