All Comments on 'Charlotte's Catharsis'

Once again, you perfectly capture the essence of submission and submissive service -- in giving up oneself to the Dominant, in entering into the experience of physical pain that opens the floodgates of emotional anguish and release, the submissive becomes more truly herself, more open to all experience and most fully known and supported by one who understands and appreciates her most honest and elemental self. Thank you for a wonderful reading experience -- beautiful creative writing supported by careful syntax, correct spelling and accurate punctuation.

regardless of the excuse--Those who get hard over the thought are not much better--

and u had to know that this question would be coming- If you have such strong feelings about this then WHY THE HELL are you in a BDSM category? WTF do you think happens in these stories? WHY are you reading these stories? Are u kidding me? Go and stay in the romance category instead. You my dear look like an assHOLE for making that comment in here. No one forced YOU in HERE or to READ this story. Maybe BDSM is dirty little secret that buried deep inside you somewhere and to make yourself feel less guilty when you're done getting your fixx when you read these stories, you think by making a negative comment to the story would make it right and make you feel not so guilty about coming in here in the first place. OMG, what MORON....What a joke....

Married to such a woman. And more importantly why the wife stays married to such a non-man. I understand the reasons why a person wishes to give up everything they are to a person be they male or female. but staying married to the husband? Now that I don't get.

Don't let the negative comments get you down, hon. Those negative comments are NOT about you, they're about the person who wrote them.

Your story is well-written, hot, and has that realistic feel that matters so much -- kudos!

i showed this story to Master with the comment that it "spoke to me" He told me that i could've written it myself!! It said so much that i wanted to say.. but couldn't find the words!

i showed this story to Master with the comment that it "spoke to me" He told me that i could've written it myself!! It said so much that i wanted to say.. but couldn't find the words!

i know the feeling!

As noted, those who do not understand should stand back. Your words are elegant and fine and you capture the internal condition of Charlotte's mind so well. Not over written, very delicately filigreed with the right amount of description and emotion. You deserve far better than the voting indicates. Brava! -C

Beautifully written, and describes the emotions, as well as the pain and the freedom that results from trust.

between pleasure and pain. I would be hit with a belt but after the pain would be the heat and if I were alone the orgasm and the deep deep pleasure.

This is the third story yours that I have read and each one is a tour de force on the genre. I am stunned at the meager grades you have been given. Perhaps the realism in you work puts some off. You write so compellingly on the events you portray I wish there were more recent offerings.

I have learned that on this site there are always those 1 star bombers and awful Anonymous comments. Ignore them. The complimentary remarks are comprehensive in their praise. Savor them ignore the others.

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