All Comments on 'Charlotte's Story Ch. 03'

A few little errors here and there. Not your usual perfection and made for an uneven read of your story. But the content was excellent and again I await your next submission....pun intended.

I re-read my story and see what you mean. I think, now that I am finally sharing these things, I may be too anxious to get them out. I probably need to slow down a little and pay more attention to the writing. This has been like some kind of catharsis for me, finally telling. I don't think I ever thought many people would want to read about me, and now I suddenly realize some people DO! And I should be more careful about it.

Kisses, and thank you.

Charlotte

I eagerly await your next submission..pun intended!

Please releas more soon