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by PennyN
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Anonymousover 13 years ago*****
So, not only is this your first effort, but English isn't your first language. I'm even more impressed now. I hope you find that good editor to help you; I have a feeling your story could be a good one.
LeFrog08over 13 years agoa bit short but a good start
Can you make your chapters a bit longer? This is well written and developped but one page is a bit short. Looking forward to more.
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