All Comments on 'Chiara and Annie Ch. 05'

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mechangel23 over 13 years ago

Bravo!

Very well done! Well thought-out, well worded, full of depth and emotion. Just about everything i look for in a great story! The only problem is the length; far too short! I hope to see much more in the near future!

Anonymousalmost 13 years ago

nicely done

i have to agree with mechangel23 you've done a great job telling the story. the wording is great but like he said far too short. loved it though anyways :)

Seebass about 1 year ago

Very beautiful story, yet again. I wish I was part of that family. You make them sound soo appealing.

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