All Comments on 'Chloe's Internship Ch. 01-05'

by mchucha

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Brilliant

Loved it, and I cant wait for more.Especially liked the humour

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Keep going! Very enjoyable.

I like the way this is developing. Keep going!

dlsloandlsloanabout 14 years ago
Great New Author!

Absolutely love this story. Very creative and extremely well written and plotted. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Super story! Please carry on!!!

I can't wait to read the rest of it... :-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Brilliant

Great story, looking forward to seeing where it's headed. Reminds me of some of my favourite series on here, so hope it carries on as well as it's started!

cbexhibcbexhibabout 14 years ago
Keep it up

This is a great start so far! Looking forward to seeing more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Amazing Start

Loving it. Judging from this one piece, you are writing at dlsloan's level. Just don't disappear on us like he did :)

mchuchamchuchaabout 14 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comments everyone. I just posted the next chapter so it should be showing up soon. After that I'm hoping to keep up a posting pace of a segment a week or two for as long as I can.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Nice teasing

Nice office setting and lowlevel teasing and sexism. I like the way this is going. Hope it doesn't descend into bondage and ganbangs, though, this is so nice and even somewhat believable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Willing suspension

Size F boobs and no bra... Where is this place? Moon Base 4?

SZENSEISZENSEIover 3 years ago

Well done Mama C. You have me hooked so expect further praise. Chloe moves fast. My kind of girl. LOL!

OmniSICOmniSICabout 2 years ago

The naivete was nice, but she turned out to be too slutty.

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12/9/12 It has been well over a year since my last update and I have to admit that I've moved onto other creative pursuits. Hopefully I'll come back to these stories some day. Thanks to everyone who has sent me encouraging words even after so much time since I made any contrib...

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