All Comments on 'Chloe's Sex Lessons Ch. 16'

What I MOST enjoyed as I read the 16 chapters was the dialogue. I liked the concept, found the sex interesting, but LOVED the character's way of speaking. I have no idea of what you might develop for a chapter 17, but I would read it with pleasure, I am sure.

ILienBagby

Grammatical and spelling errors are greatly increased in this chapter of Chloe's story. Seemingly, most could have been easily found and corrected with a proofread and edit of the text before submission to Literotica.