All Comments on 'Choices'

If you were mine I'd work you over a lot harder, most of it was very hot, good for cumming but you obviously need more punishment, more humiliation, would you like that little cunt?

Truly on to something with this story. Great writting and so believable. I really like stories like this, makes a girls mind start to working. What a creative Master he is, the only thing I would like to see is more.

Thanks

sheryl

I loved the ideas here and the dialogue was great, but the shifting between first and third person was rather distracting. A good edit would refine this to a really pleasurable read.