by Igypt
I loved the ideas here and the dialogue was great, but the shifting between first and third person was rather distracting. A good edit would refine this to a really pleasurable read.
Truly on to something with this story. Great writting and so believable. I really like stories like this, makes a girls mind start to working. What a creative Master he is, the only thing I would like to see is more.
Thanks
sheryl
If you were mine I'd work you over a lot harder, most of it was very hot, good for cumming but you obviously need more punishment, more humiliation, would you like that little cunt?